** Warning *** Mature content ahead *** My “sort of” erotic piece ***
I’ll be posting this short story in a few installments, weekly. Woukd love to have your feedback on it, pretty please?
The young woman swallowed and breathed deeply as her hand encircled his fully erect penis. She could feel the blood coursing through its veins, its warmth spreading to her palm, going up her arm and settling at the pit of her stomach. Her slightly trembling hand began its movement, exploring every centimeter of his, every bulge, every curve, every sensitive spot.
He was holding his breath as she moved through his length. A flood of new sensations was taking over him, as he closed his eyes and surrender to that touch and to her, completely. How could she, a ‘simple girl’, make him feel so helpless and yet so powerful, like no one else had? She had him wrapped around her finger and he only wanted to remain so.
Then, as if knowing his thoughts, her lips were resting where her hand had been. The cool breath coming from her parted lips made him tingle all over, shivers traveling along his skin. the nervousness he had sensed from her was now gone, as her mouth began to explore his organ, lips, tongue and teeth alike. One wandering hand descended, starting to caress his testicles ever so lightly it was even barely considered as touching. He was completely exposed to her, in all of his vulnerabilities, yet he loved every moment of it, as her mouth slowly began accommodating his length.
Even though visibly inexperienced as she was, he couldn’t take that kind of stimulation for long before he found himself going over the edge. Though mostly against his will – and hers – he had to stop her sweet torture and devise one of his own making. Suddenly, he noticed the hand that rested amongst the ginger-dyed strands of hair, having failed to realize he had even moved to that gesture before that instant. She had really blown his mind.
Trying hard to break the spell of her vision as she was down on him, the young man pushed her aside gently, landing her once again on the soft carpet with his body towering over hers. There was a look of surprise on her face which was only outmatched by the intense pleasure piercing him through her half-closed eyes. He proceeded hastily to remove whatever was left of her garments, before his determination wavered under her gaze.